From astute suggestions I received from Carol
Uecker, I was able to update my King Manor - Buy a Basket poster.
Carol wrote: “James, This is a wonderfully laid out
poster! However, check the sentence that starts Five dollars.......
maybe say fruit or vegetable (not and), also change your to you?
I like the inclusion of ALL the dates. Carol”
While I have no idea how those errors got into my text,
this proves that most writers need observant editors to improve their text.
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